story #2

once upon another time, there was a girl. she was moving out of the house for the first time ever. she was excited, scared, and looking forward to the life she was about to lead. she settled in, and was sad, but noticed how new and wonderful her situation was. so she worked, not as hard as she should have, but she worked. time passed, and she was not happy with the work she was doing. it wasn't enough. meanwhile, she met a boy. this boy was handsome, adorable, kind, and genuine. she found herself thinking about this boy at times when she was alone. the boy did many kind things for the girl, and she thought of kind things she could do for him. so, she plotted, and she wrote. she wrote a lot of nice, pretty, sweet things to say thank you. finally, she finished with her writings, and gave the boy her writings. he was thrilled and filled with joy at the nice things the girl wrote. they began to notice that they were falling....and as time passed, their relationship grew and grew and grew and now their lives are intertwined, one without the other would be lonely indeed. they laugh, they hug, they are close and wouldn't have it any other way. and so far, they live happily ever after.

i like this one better.